panicattheary panicattheary
  • 11-10-2016
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The storyline is this: A shy girl writes a letter to her crush, he reads it, and they become a couple

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lkholder lkholder
  • 11-10-2016
Cute but needs more depth
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sophie31
sophie31 sophie31
  • 11-10-2016
Add some drama to it drama makes the story better
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